Venus Fly Trap explanation

LI: To write a detailed paragrph.
Today for writing we had to write a detailed paragraph. Our teacher wrote a explanation about venus fly traps and we had to work on that and make his explanation a detailed paragraph. We had to write at least three or more sentences and I completed my work. We had to base our writing about venus fly traps wich are carnivorous plants. I also learnt by listening to the instructions, by working hard and bieng focused on my work.