Punctuation and Paragraphs

LI: to make improvements to a recount
This week for writing we had to first make a poster about as much Punctuation we know with our group. Next we were give a messed up recount for us to put back in order. Afterwards we had to take one of the paragraphs from the messed up recount and improve it by adding more interesting punctuation, better sentences and so on. We learnt this new skill by being taught by Mr Ogilvie. The tools I used to complete this task were my netbook and the app I used for the punctuation and the messed up recount was google drawings.