Tuesday, 17 December 2019

SLJ | Mircale on the Hudson

LI: To create a paraghraph about something that we or someone we know did bravely.
For the final D2 SLJ task we had to write about something we did, it could've also been someone we know. I wrote about the time that me and my cousin went to rainbows end for my 10th birthday. We first learnt about Mr Chesley Sullenberger ( Sully ) who saved over 100 people from death on a falling plane. He saved those people by skimming the plane across the Hudson River.

2 comments:

  1. Mōrena Oscar,

    You are on a roll with completing your activities for the Summer Learning Journey, well done! :)

    Wow that is very brave of you! I love going to Rainbow Ends but I am so scared of all the rides that go really high because it makes my tummy feel really weird! I am so glad that you were able to get out of your comfort zone. It can be really hard to try new things or things that we might be scared of but hey you did it! :)

    Keep up the awesome work Oscar :)

    Ngā mihi,
    Mani

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  2. Hi Oscar!
    I like the little story you wrote. Is this event true or made up? It sounds very good. I think you should change the font as it can be hard to read for some people.
    Blog you later!
    ~ Florence

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