Writing | Writing Changes

LI: To revise and edit a recount
This week in writing we had to learn how to improve sentences. First we had to get a partener within our group. Next we had 40 minutes to write a recount about Kiwi Can, Kiwi Sport or Music. Once our recount was complete we had to let our partener improve it. This was a competition because we had to try and get the most points because there was a point system. The loser had to write a recount about the 2 other choices & the winners prize was not told to us. I sadly lost with 27 points and my partener won fair in square with 45 points. We learnt this skill by being taught by Mr Ogilvie. The tools I used were my netbook and the app I used was google document.